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I want to be a writer/poet/lyricist one day and I wrote these lyrics for my fiance. It's sort of a serenade because, it was written specifically for her so in the second chorus it says "Eyes Set to Kill" that's just her favorite band, but anyway..
Thoughts? Advice? It's all much appreciated.
The sun comes out just to see your face
The moon, to illuminate your grace
The wind, to take my breath away
Because you.. make it that way.
Your sparkling eyes are making me stumble
And I've seem to have forgotten how to speak
You're smart and you're pretty
Oh god, you've got to be kidding..
You said you're name was Rebecca
And you liked the color blue
Well, I like to sing in the shower
And If you'd like, I'll sing to you
I tripped, fell, then I hit my head
Laying there, I just felt dead
I couldn't move, I couldn't speak
I was looking up at you, looking down at me
Stumbling all over I must've forgot to tie my shoe
You know that saying, "No one is perfect?"
Well I guess "No one" is you.
You said you're name was Rebecca
And you liked "Eyes Set to Kill"
Well, I'd like to take you to dinner
And If you'd like, I'll pay the bill
Sometimes I stare at you while you're sleeping,
Just to watch you breathing, I know it sounds creepy
But your heartbeat matches mine
I wrap my arms around you and I start to cry
Time's flown by and now we're getting married
Who ever would have knew?
The truth is that I never wanted anything
The way that I want you
Thoughts? Advice? It's all much appreciated.
The sun comes out just to see your face
The moon, to illuminate your grace
The wind, to take my breath away
Because you.. make it that way.
Your sparkling eyes are making me stumble
And I've seem to have forgotten how to speak
You're smart and you're pretty
Oh god, you've got to be kidding..
You said you're name was Rebecca
And you liked the color blue
Well, I like to sing in the shower
And If you'd like, I'll sing to you
I tripped, fell, then I hit my head
Laying there, I just felt dead
I couldn't move, I couldn't speak
I was looking up at you, looking down at me
Stumbling all over I must've forgot to tie my shoe
You know that saying, "No one is perfect?"
Well I guess "No one" is you.
You said you're name was Rebecca
And you liked "Eyes Set to Kill"
Well, I'd like to take you to dinner
And If you'd like, I'll pay the bill
Sometimes I stare at you while you're sleeping,
Just to watch you breathing, I know it sounds creepy
But your heartbeat matches mine
I wrap my arms around you and I start to cry
Time's flown by and now we're getting married
Who ever would have knew?
The truth is that I never wanted anything
The way that I want you
