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[Dorien]

Warning, it is not at the same level of skill as normal art. So don't flame, thx. I'm still learning and posting for comments/feedback.

[Buu]

Can't say it's great, but it is better than what I can do. Try making the legs and head smaller.

[Look]

muahhahhahahaha

*laughing till out of breath*

*clear throat*
sorry, didn't mean to laugh, and i wasn't laughing at your work, i mean, i was laughing about the work, but not mean any harm. i was just happy to see something that's so different. It reminds me of piccaso (is that how you spell his name)
also i was laughing b/c the thought of make its head smaller might make it look cuter. 'cuz then i realize a lot ofthe cute things either has a extreme small head, or an enormouse big head

eh.. ok, i admit it, i'm drunk...

it's a very fresh start. i'm looking forward to more of your works... *hiccups*
if only i can find my mouse and move to the top of my post, and delete those misunderstoodable laughings... *hiccup*
*pass out*

[Chipmunk777]

make the body longer and leaner, and make the head smaller and more streamlined. Make the legs longer, and a bit thinner. Find some way to change the wing (i dont know whats wrong with it, just looks weird)

[UjikaWeapon]

How bout this?

[Chipmunk777]

uh, what does that have to do with dorien's picture, ukija? It's a really good drawing, but you don't need to put it in every thread

[Kingbob]

its a way better picture than your taru or orc, but it still needs help. ill list some stuff to help you.

-head too big make it 3/4 the size
- body needs longer (how can i ride that)
-make the feathers all over the place
ok do those then repost it i would like to see it

[TiskTisk]

no offence but looks like a turkey hehe but pretty nice.