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  • #76
    Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

    Originally posted by fallenintoshadows View Post
    Noted all that, I'll try and fix it :p
    fallenintoshadows on deviantART

    EDIT:
    OK, how's the chin now? It still doesn't look right to me, is it the jaw that's weird?


    Does this jaw line look better?
    Bottom one for sure. But there's something wrong with the rest of his face too... the mouth looks off and I'm pretty sure its gonna be tough fixing that... but it does look weird...

    Example of a similar expression:


    On your drawing, maybe the outline is too dark.. or the line might be too pronounced, specially on the nose, look at this guy's nose, its much simpler and not so protrude.

    The "anger" lines on your guy's eyes are also very pronounced and thick which makes it look like hes using camo paint, the eyeshadow is waaaay too much... and there's something weird going on with his eyes... its hard to put into words but I'd say his left eye is too big and too skewed upwards.

    Another thing, look at the example I'm showing you, the left eyebrow is actually covering part of the eye. On your picture however, the guy looks more like he's in shock rather than "angry", he's not frowning enough, his eyes are just like "O_O" instead of ">_<" lol... wish I could help more :p

    I really like this one and would love to see it finished but his face is really off...
    signatures are for pussies mew mew mew, here's mine

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    • #77
      Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

      I took away the colour for now, how does this look??


      EDIT: Bah no.. I don't like the anger lines >w< Back to photoshop



      Noo... I still don't like it >w<

      How's this?
      Last edited by fallenintoshadows; 02-05-2009, 06:38 AM.



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      • #78
        Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

        mouth SO much better, a hint of a grin too which is nice

        eyes lost a bit of their "angerness" now... hmm.. maybe because of the grinning?

        its much better now though!

        good job on the lower lip, that line was weird
        signatures are for pussies mew mew mew, here's mine

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        • #79
          Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

          Awesome ^-^
          I don't mind it going from angry to grin :D



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          • #80
            Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

            Ok, the thing for me is the eyes. With them so wide open, so much white showing, they look more like shock with anger. Maybe narrow them more? I don't know...just the eyes seem to open. If I was going to stab someone, I'd be concentrating and squinching my eyes. LOL
            Originally posted by Feba
            But I mean I do not mind a good looking man so long as I do not have to view his penis.
            Originally posted by Taskmage
            God I hate my periods. You think passing a clot through a vagina is bad? Try it with a penis.
            Originally posted by DakAttack
            ...I'm shitting dicks out of my eyeballs in excitement for the next bestgreating game of all time ever.
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            • #81
              Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

              Yeah you're right, the eyes are too wide, they make him look crazy. I haven't changed them though, I can live with that as well as a couple of other flaws I've noticed in this picture >w< Not perfect, maybe another time I'll fix it all:

              Last edited by fallenintoshadows; 02-07-2009, 12:57 PM.



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              • #82
                Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                There's still something else wrong with the dude, but I can't pin what. Maybe he has his harness on too tight on his body? Or maybe it's the way he's holding his off-handed dagger.

                The Orc, however, is nigh perfect, but something gets me about his axe. It's bent, and I'm a little iffy on if Orcs wield Axes like that.
                Originally posted by Armando
                No one at Square Enix has heard of Occam's Razor.
                Originally posted by Armando
                Nintendo always seems to have a legion of haters at the wings ready to jump in and prop up straw men about hardware and gimmicks and casuals.
                Originally posted by Taskmage
                GOD IS MIFFED AT AMERICA

                REPENT SINNERS OR AT LEAST GIVE A NONCOMMITTAL SHRUG

                GOD IS AMBIVALENT ABOUT FURRIES

                THE END IS COMING ONE OF THESE DAYS WHEN GOD GETS AROUND TO IT
                Originally posted by Taskmage
                However much I am actually smart, I got that way by confronting how stupid I am.
                Matthew 16:15
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                • #83
                  Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                  Yeah I noticed the bent axe too X3 But I'm fed up with this picture and want to move onto the next >_>; I'll probably fix it one day.

                  I've changed the picture in my previous post, I deleted the outlines on his chest, I think it looks better.



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                  • #84
                    Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                    Originally posted by Yellow Mage View Post
                    There's still something else wrong with the dude, but I can't pin what.
                    His head is too small for his body.
                    Originally posted by Feba
                    But I mean I do not mind a good looking man so long as I do not have to view his penis.
                    Originally posted by Taskmage
                    God I hate my periods. You think passing a clot through a vagina is bad? Try it with a penis.
                    Originally posted by DakAttack
                    ...I'm shitting dicks out of my eyeballs in excitement for the next bestgreating game of all time ever.
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                    • #85
                      Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                      I still say it's because he looks frozen in midair; and not in a good way. It needs to be done in a more sketch style.
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                      • #86
                        Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                        Its actually better to move on sometimes instead of becoming frustrated with a single piece, learn from experience and keep doing new stuff that's the way it should be
                        signatures are for pussies mew mew mew, here's mine

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                        • #87
                          Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                          oooooo *poses*
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                          Kain (FFIV): I am aware of my actions, but can do nothing about them.
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                          • #88
                            Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                            Originally posted by TheGrandMom View Post
                            His armor is too small for his body.
                            This. Except the shoulder pieces: those a probably a little too big.
                            Originally posted by Armando
                            No one at Square Enix has heard of Occam's Razor.
                            Originally posted by Armando
                            Nintendo always seems to have a legion of haters at the wings ready to jump in and prop up straw men about hardware and gimmicks and casuals.
                            Originally posted by Taskmage
                            GOD IS MIFFED AT AMERICA

                            REPENT SINNERS OR AT LEAST GIVE A NONCOMMITTAL SHRUG

                            GOD IS AMBIVALENT ABOUT FURRIES

                            THE END IS COMING ONE OF THESE DAYS WHEN GOD GETS AROUND TO IT
                            Originally posted by Taskmage
                            However much I am actually smart, I got that way by confronting how stupid I am.
                            Matthew 16:15
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                            • #89
                              Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

                              My sketch of my next picture: X3




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                              • #90
                                her legs are a bit long but other than that its looking good

                                well and her hand is a bit.. err prosthetic-ish XD..
                                signatures are for pussies mew mew mew, here's mine

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