My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

[Yellow Mage]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

One part of the picture that gets me upon seeing S-E's rendition is that, over her eyes, you made her mithra markings look like eyebrows. And furthermore, her eyes in the original are more relaxed than they are in the picture.

That's about it . . . in S-E's model, they definitely also failed with handling the tail, from what little I can see of it.

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

I lined the markings so I knew where they were, when I finish colouring I'm going to delete the outlines so they blend into the skin and look less like eyebrows

Also I wanted to change the eyes XD

[Aksannyi]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

{Found it!} You're on BG! =)

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

XD! Yeah I only posted that today! My DA account is fallenintoshadows on deviantART if you want to see my other, not so good stuff XD

[Aksannyi]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

I haven't been to deviantArt in ages. I might have to check it out later. =)

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

Coloured version:

[Balfree]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

awesome job, you've come a long way...!

the right hand looks a bit bulky and manly, same with her right elbow.

i know youre following the screenshot.. and you've managed to do that perfectly.

im also of the opinion that her head is a little too much to the side... :/ other than those very small issues, it looks great

keep them coming

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

I finally got a tablet! So I've been practicing with it to try and get the hang of it which is harder than I thought it would be! So far I've done this sketch for my old LS leader, which I plan to line properly and colour:

I tried to give the impression Fenrir is like one of those big German Shepherd dogs that would plod along at the same pace as it's master while Carby is more like a little terrier, bounding along in front.

[Balfree]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

wow, nice! thats all im gonna say...

it could easily be called an original SE piece...

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

Just a little preview of this coloured, I'm trying something different by not using such definite outlines:


I'm also going to *attempt* a background for this picture X3

[TheGrandMom]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

Wow, you are really going all out on this one! Good luck with that! Keep us up to date!

[fallenintoshadows]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

It's still not finished! I'm going to add a background to it but here it is without one:

[Aksannyi]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

Wow!

[Balfree]

Astonishing.

I only see one little tiny bit of a problem that is probably really easy to fix so yeah... Fenrir's tail right above his left ankle, its not very "furry" on that spot and it looks a little odd after spotting it.

Other than that, I must say you have come a long way.

I love the sketchy look... I was kinda hoping you would keep it after coloring.

How's the tablet coming along? I'm planning on buying one even though my work is of a different nature.

Oh and BTW... PLEASE keep posting these as you make them!

[Kailea]

Re: My first attempt (with patience and effort) at a full body drawing...

*claps* oooo ^.^ good stuff