First drawing!

[exile2k3]

I have been doodling anime for a while, this is the only picture i have actually worked on for more than 5 minutes, my scanner cut part of it out, but it got most of it, here it is

[Look]

his nose is a bit long... and it's rather sketchy... you intend to draw it as a chibi version? 'cuz i see you make his body small. it'd be better if you could make him a different pose, rather than starring at ppl with those sad puppy eyes.