Look at this!

[Grodark]

what do you think about this drawing i did? give me some feedback

[UjikaWeapon]

Nice, good job. A little graphic for the younger crowd though eh? I can't wait for the Elvaan battle!

[Grodark]

yea ty... im currently working on an Elvaan battle scene it is tons of work!!! all i know is that its going to look great :-D

[Grodark]

Here is a Photoshop version of my battle scene!

[Laguna]

Um...to be honest the pic looks very plain...my advice is work on eyes.

[Apoc]

RE:

Ok not to bash you or anything but my honest opinion is It's decent for now but really you gotta work on it. You might want to try coloring it with PS and inking it more. The girl on the right look at her right arm it curves backwards man which makes her breast out of proportion. the eyes a bit weird as well the look VERY distant from one another might want to try re-doing them. Also work on angling to (Look at the left bra strap). Well I could post more PM if you if want some guides on how to fix this and become better

[carl713]

Please dont take offence man but...

its not too great...:sweat:

you got the right stuff, thats for sure!!!

but you need A LOTmore work...

keep it up man...

PRACTICE! PRACTICE!! PRACTICE!!!

[Kusanagi]

Constructive Criticism:

You have alot to work on...A suggestion take a couple of life drawing classes, most manga and anime artist start off by learning how to draw the human figure, once they do that then they mold their knowledge of drawing into there own manga style. Use Tetsuya Nomura for inspiration. Good Luck.

[Grodark]

wow! i actually got some posts! lol well it was a 10 min sketch really.. and all i wanted to do was show off my artwork a bit.. for some peoples info im still in Highschool so i cant really go and take classes... plus i dont have to much time.. im pretty dedicated to other aspects... and well :sweat: i will practice more... hehe i will go restart on everything.. just to make it look better.. but i will do that after i go and finish my Elvaan Battlescene.... which will be pretty cool... im not leaving out any gore.. but it wont be professionally colored or anything... just a sketch by a 16 yr old kid :sweat: lol just to let you know how old i am... ive only been drawing for a few months since i actually got into it... i will try to do some real life drawings too.. but the proportions always get messed up :sweat: .... well they always say practice makes perfect!! lol... WOW I WROTE ALOT!!! lmao

[Apoc]

Re:

You could take summer classes Thats what I'm doing for like a month lol

[Grodark]

hehe well i would but i have a job :sweat: im going to be working extra hard during the summer because i am a landscaper! lol lots of work to be done then. I WILL BE ROLLIN IN THE BIG BUX tho lol :-D

[carl713]

Hey dude...

u just got to keep it up...draw whenever you have a chance...

really man, it helps a LOT!!!

u'll get better with time...PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT MAN!!!!