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  • Diaries of vanadiel!

    hello ppl well this is the side story of my character i hoe u like it ^^

    Many tales have been told trough the centuries and this makes no exception. The fate of a family is about to change.

    Chapther One: The Black Sheep.

    -Lowess, come here boy! I need your help with those ores, and bring me the crystals. Hurry up boy! "This kid… I dunno what’s happening with him, he's so clumsy.

    - I’m here dad, don’t yell. Here- he hands the ores to his father.

    -What’s taking you so long Lowess, huh?

    -I was practicing swordship, - and the young one shows a big smile to his dad.

    -WHAT!- yells the old man- You are still babbling the same nonsense, Lowess. I’ve told you a million times before you wont become a Knight, -Lowess's dad was yelling as loud as a bear’s growl - You`ll became blacksmith as me, and my father before me and his father before him! You can’t let the Alidreill’s family tradition die for such nonsense! Oh, gods, you are more reckless than a goat!!!

    -Why do you always try to defy my fate dad? I want to be a knight and that way will be!
    The eyes of the old man gave the boy a mean look and, after that, thoses words were summoned: "Lowess Alidreill, you’ll just became a knight over my dead body" and then... "So be it"- said the young Lowess screaming at his angry father and the old man, blinded by rage, tryed to hit Lowess with a slap. But suddenly.. a female voice…

    -You two stop right now! Are you mad or something?!-

    -Woman, don’t you dare get in the middle of us. If someone is mad is this black sheep,
    a shame for the family..."

    -Zuriell, - the old lady said..- I’ll talk to him. Let me calm him down, he's just a boy. He doesn’t know anything.

    -I am not a boy -Lowess said

    -Be quiet, Lowess, for your own good"

    -Yes mom...I’ll be quiet"

    -Woman! - Yells the old man- you better talk to your son, before I get back for dinner... And you little brat - pinpoint to Lowess- consider yourself lucky...


    Late that night, under a full moon glow....

    -Are you going anywhere, Lowess?

    -Mom! ... yes mother, I've made up my mind... i will became a knight!

    -I guess it can’t be helped, my son. You are just like your uncle... He was a knight you know..

    -My uncle....uncle Yllur? But he I believed him dead...

    -That is what your father wants to make you believe, just to hide from you the fact that he was a knight. But tell me, my son, why a knight rather than a blacksmith?

    -For the gift, mom. Because I want to be gifted with the power to protect my people, to protect my believes and ideals... I'm sorry mom but even you can’t stop me now.

    -I wont stop you, if it’s really your dream, Lowess... But I think you will need this

    -the old woman hands over to her son a peace of fabric more like a robe which was wrapping something- Open it son, it was from my brother... your uncle Yllur’s Greenpath...

    -A sword and a shield... but mom....

    -From now on, my son, you won’t be called Alidreill no more. Your new name will be Lowess Greenpath from the Greenpath Family of the Bastok Republic. Go away now, stranger. I’ll love you forever, my son....

    -Mother… no, Lucchia Alidreill, I'll never forget you and I swear in the memory of your son I’ll become the greatest knight ever... Good bye woman; good bye mother…

    With tears in theirs eyes now the strangers say goodbye to each other... and
    that way the tale on this young boy begun.

    This is my tale...

    Lowess Greenpath

    Page 1....


    chapter 2 "the tale unfolds" coming soon
    What you persue will be yours....
    but you will lose something dear....

  • #2
    Re: Diaries of vanadiel!

    Moved to Member Fan Works.


    Icemage

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    • #3
      Re: Diaries of vanadiel!

      oki ^^
      What you persue will be yours....
      but you will lose something dear....

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      • #4
        Re: Diaries of vanadiel!

        I'll Be Sumbitiing The Secondpage This Week I Hope You Read It ^_^
        What you persue will be yours....
        but you will lose something dear....

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