please check this out and leave feed back lol ok

[Newbz]

i suck at this but i try so hard to make this please let me know if is ok or bad
enjoi lol really i think is cute in a way lol what u think?

[Newbz]

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[Altae]

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The effort certainly is pretty worthwhile to comment on. But the captions/text bubbles aren't very legible. I can't tell if you're trying to make the character say "bish," "BST," or "both."

[Jekk]

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I can't read most of it o_o you should leave the bubbles blank and then add the words on photoshop/paint or whatever you have. It's pretty good^^ You could work on side views though.

[Newbz]

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>.< if i could only put them the normal size u guys could read it everything is so small so u cant make out the words >.< sorry anyway if anyone is wondering whats about it
its about those two moffos going at a electronic store to buy the new expansion pack lol
if you know how despered some people are and u know they cant wait a day or 2 to get it
and rush there the very day it comes out lol its a freaking war!! lol but i do feel so bad cause u guys cant read it >.< ill try to fix it

[Samuzuki]

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very nice.

[Hecky]

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lmao!!! i loved the one whit whm afk! lol really good i like your style

[Balfree]

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your style is really refreshing, but yea, the text is barely readable..

[Newbz]

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thanks here i fixed the 3 first pages maybe u can read it now

[Newbz]

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can anyone tell me if there is a way to put the picture here without making it small?

cause everytime i post i have to make them small and the letters cant be seen i hate that

[Centurion]

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if you link the photos to an image hosting site you can have larger pictures.

here is a list of Image hosting sites

hope that helps

[Newbz]

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http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?im...nthief1nm7.jpg

http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief2ym5.jpg

http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief3lz3.jpg

http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief4ft7.jpg


if those links work check them out 3 pictures of a new manga style comic i made i think their really funny but thats just me let me know if you guys like them