The Greatest Newb

[Taklest]

i found this small manga on one of me books and so here it is tell me what ya think?

[Jarre]

Re: The Greatest Newb

Greatest newb???? wheres the picture? the greatest noob would know how to post it etc. so....

No greatest noob.....

Just a standard noob!!!

[Taklest]

Re: The Greatest Newb

sorry the picture was to big to load lol but here it is

[Jei]

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the style is pretty good. just need some clean up and will be gorgeuous.

[Taklest]

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ill try

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The greedy, the clueless and the Newb

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ill just put my pictures here and if you guys like one let me know =)

[Jarre]

Re: The Greatest Newb

Thats better...

As Jei said a bit of tidying up and hould look really good.

Regarding the text if you have a 2H or 4H pencil draw feint guides, 3 lines - 1 for top of caps letters and tall letters, 1 in the middle for top of lower case letters and one at the bottom. Its a standard draughtsmans technique, but it makes lettering much better. If you pen over the wording afterwards you can rub out all the lines.

The shadows are good and the detail.

As for the second picture, a few shadows here and there and it warrents a caption!!, Maybe something to do with that huge sword the female warrior is carrying.

Once you are happy with how pictures are try inking them in as it brings more depth to the pictures.

Hope this helps and keep up the good work.

[Taklest]

Re: The Greatest Newb

heres the clueless

[Vence]

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nice drawin dude. Kind of get me an idea. I can make some FFXI cartoon comics! What an Idea! HA I thought of it!