Hi. My name is Bloodredpoet, BRP, or something along those lines. This is the story, or fan fiction you could say, about the world of Vana'diel. It expands on the story from the FFXI game, so expect spoilers as the story progresses. Hinatakun of Midgardsormr began editting the story starting at chapter 5. Sorry for the crappiness for chapter 1 to 4, luckily they are all very short and the story starts expanding from that point on.
This is not the first thread of the story. Old thread -> http://www.ffxionline.com/forums/sho...3&page=1&pp=20 . I've added a sub title to this one, which isn't exactly official. I also edited Chapter 1 a little(its slightly more barable). Anyway... Here you go. Thank you to Hinatakun, who pretty much runs this ship ;p. PS. Ode is like part of a song. So Ode One means, part one.
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The Vana'diel Tragedy
Romance of a Crumbled Rose
Ode One
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VANA’DIEL TRAGEDY
Chapter One: Common Acquaintances and Total Strangers
Many ages after five tears were shed…
In a walk to unknown lands...
Young of the ancients awaken the shadow...
Giving life to their sleeping fathers…
The beasts are seduced by the power of decay...
Finally the kingdom of the evil falls thanks to heroes...
Years since the great rage that scarred many...
The shadow is reborn by the temptation of strength....
Only those affected by the chaos could stop it...
Behind the evil is the true darkness...
The light of the fallen ancients will cast the final curse...
The land to be eaten alive by the souls of the people…
The violent eyed man will see into the red eyes of his brother
Only the mortals can end the damnation...
And Reveal The Final Truths.
-A ripped article found on the expedition in Xarcabard ten years before the Crystal War.
“How far is it, papa?†a child boy Tarutaru’s voice said in question, somewhere in the total blackness.
“Notaru far†a grown male Tarutaru’s voice responded with a hint of happiness.
“Run! It is a Yagudo! It has a sworrrrd!†a young Mithran girl shouted with fear.
“Papa! Whaty you doing?! We got to run!†the child’s voice screamed in related panic.
“Run my son. Protect your mother as I will protect you two and Koshii’s familyâ€
“Papa!â€... “Papa!â€... “Papaaaa!â€
The loud thunder exploded in sound.
Kurin-Juran jumped out of his warm bed with a gasp. He was out of breath and in a cold sweat. The room was in total darkness. Heavy rain pounded on the roof and windows with roaring thunder could be heard from outside. Kurin wiped the sweat off his forehead. Those words and the darkness, he never stopped getting that nightmare. It was a true occurrence: the last moments of his father’s life. His head ached and he rubbed the sides of his skull.
‘That Yagudo with that long, curved sword, he... it... killed my father’ Kurin-Juran thought to himself. ‘Yet I still avoid hunting them now that I have gathered the strength to do so. Why?’ Kurin questioned his own beliefs while his face lay buried in his tiny hands. The ache ended slowly. Kurin-Juran was a Tarutaru, very short in the standards of a Hume. His head was big, like others of his race, with untidy silver hair and bright blue eyes. Two long ears sprouted from the sides his head. A piece of his silver hair was spiked up out of randomness. In the obscurity his tan skin color seemed almost black.
Those were memories of when he went to Mhaura to avoid the war, now titled the Crystal War or the Great War, with his family and a Mithran family. A Yagudo attacked and killed the Mithran father with a single slice. Before the Yagudo could finish the whole Mithran family, Kurin’s father tackled the Beastmen. The Yagudo’s blade impaled his father as Kurin watched in horror with his mother’s hand pulling him away. With the little of the strength the heroic Tarutaru had left, he cast a spell of thunder that electrocuted and killed them both. Once they reached Mhaura, they prayed for the lives lost.
Kurin-Juran slid out of the red sheets of his simple bed and walked to his armory. He changed out of his green pajama-like commoner clothing into an adventurer’s attire: A brown tunic with black designs and a small leather pack located on the back, lined purple slops, small worn out shoes, a leather belt worn by shamans, and a well-cut wooden rod. He then went over to a small round table crafted for Tarutarus’ size. On the furnishing were two amber jewel earrings, two bone-like rings, and two silver armlets. Kurin put them all on. The Tarutaru walked to his fountain and rinsed his face and his hands. He waited for the rain to end as he sat in a small chair, in the night’s blackness. Once the rain stopped shortly soon following the thunder, he opened the rosewood door and walked out. After shutting the door behind him he traveled through the Windurst residential area on wet ground, wooden and dirt. On his way to the Port district, Kurin saw many small wooden houses and one large Jeuno-style building for foreign adventurers.
Windurst was a city carved out of rock and grassland. No iron or steel streets and structures. Trees and grass was everywhere in the huge city. The roads were dirt or rock tile and the buildings were wood. From almost any point in Windurst or near it, one could see Heaven’s Tower. Heaven’s Tower was a magical tower with a very large tree growing right out of it. Its size is legendary and seems one would be close to the moon if they stood to the very top. Also noticeable in Windurst was its battle scars from the Crystal War. Entire districts had been sunken into lakes, with long bridges connecting the islands that remained.
Once in Port, the smell of salty seawater was summoned to Kurin’s small fuzzy nose. He noticed the sky, now clear of dark clouds, was getting lighter. “Day is coming-moming soon†the Tarutaru caught himself saying quietly. He walked over to the fishing guild’s dock. He had about one hour until it would open. He looked at the everlasting sea slowly giving birth to the sun and he smiled. Today would be his first mission with his friend Cronin, so beginning the alliance that a legend will be based around.
Many regions away... across the Bastore sea... two Bastokian warriors stood in the streets of the Metalworks district. Day seemed even farther on the other side of Vana'diel, Bastok. They were clad in blue plated chain mail armor and guarded the President’s Office as Iron Musketeers.
“So, heard about these two low ranked Bastokian adventurers?†the bald Hume one said to a fellow Hume with blond spiky hair.
“Hmmm… ranked low and important? I never heard anything about them†answered the young Iron Musketeer interested as he kicked his unfitting boot in, using the stone ground below.
“Well they are quite the impressive ones... a Hume with skills said to be similar to and as strong Zeid himself!†the tattooed bald Hume described.
“Wow... the Galkan swordsman who gave his life in the Crystal War to fight the Shadow Lord?! What about the other one?†he asked with a shock.
“The other one is named Bleeding Wolf or something... a Galka who claims he served the Tale-Keeper in his past life and will do so again. Both of their fighting abilities are said to be superb. In fives days they already have become ‘Rank Three’!†the Hume storyteller finally finished being as fascinated himself as if he heard it.
“Centurion status in five days? That is amazing... truly amazing" the listener was stunned for a second and then continued, "Speaking of the Tale-keeper. Rumors among the miners say that he has returnedâ€.
“Yes, it seems a lot of strange happenings are in play. Also they say the Quadavs and the rest of the Beastmen seem more active than ever. I think the Mythril Musketeers will be needed soon†the bald Hume said glaring up toward the stars that graced the black sky. “Rare sight in Bastok to see the stars...â€
The republic named Bastok was a city built on the mountains and mines, half of it over the salty sea. Using the newest technology of carpentry and building, Bastok looked very modern. The roads and houses were built with white and gray stone. At the center of the city were a large factory house and a series of giant smokestacks that rose out of the roof. Bastok’s air was muggy and dense due to the blacksmithing and engineering constantly being done.
On the other side of Bastok, the Mines, two adventurers walked the shadowy streets.
“Shinato... we will be late†a Galka said quietly who was very big even contrasted to any other Galka. His pale and gray skin was under a tan doublet, black slacks, a white martial arts belt, and no weapons or footwear. His black hair, both on body and head, was spiked up on the very top of his head. Sticking out of his doublet was his thick tail.
“Bah, screw them. Stupid president officials!†a black haired Hume said with a growl. His brunette hair was in a bang and messy fashion. He wore the armor of a Centurion: Blue and white scaled breastplate and mail, gauntlets, leg ware, boots and helm. On his back were a large wooden-handle scythe and an even larger black-bladed great sword at the same time. Shinato's was able to hold both weapons on his back as if it was one. Very slightly engraved on the great sword close to the handle was the word ‘Deathbringer’.
“Shinato, pesky as they may be in your eyes, we should respect our leaders and their whims†the Galka said looking forward at their inclined destination.
“Yeah... yeah... respect that! Bow to him! Don’t kill it!†Shinato mimicked the lawful Galka while they rapidly walked down some stairs. His voice was pretty spiteful.
“I only speak the virtuous word. We are heroes and people expect us to act so†the Galka responded with almost no emotion: obliviously grown numb of his Hume partner’s whining.
“Wrong my friend. I am an adventurer... a mercenary. On that topic, I pay taxes! I don't even have a real house... rather crap if I could say so myself. I would like to see the president slaughter hundreds of Quadavs like we have†Shinato kept on complaining as they went down another set of stone stairs.
They reached the in-house tunnel entrance to the Market district. “Well Shinato you go protest to our president while I get our information. Then we do it†he said with his fur glowing from the lunar light like a wolf singing to the moon.
“Bleeding Wolf... don’t be the government’s dog!†Shinato scald his friend looking away in disgust.
“Hmmm, I have been called worst, even by you†answered Bleeding Wolf humorlessly, though not without a smirk, as they entered the dark gate leading to the Market district.
On the same continent, but several miles and miles away; past the Konschtatt Highlands, the Valkrum Dunes, and the La Theine Plateau... in the center of mighty forest Ronfarue, was a proud kingdom: San d’Oria. It was night there too. Most of the long-eared Elvaans were asleep in their beds, crude or royal. The Temple Knights stood at the Ranperre’s Gate, blocking off any Orcs who would wish to slaughter this kingdom’s peoples.
Auricant, an adult Elvaan in his tan lizard leather armor and helm with a large sliver shield strapped to his right arm, was having a conversation with one of them. His long, neat hair was silver. San d’Oria was a kingdom with castle-based design. People often called it a fortress more than a city. The city had much plant life living within the gate walls unlike Bastok, but nowhere as much as Windurst had. Gray brick and black wood built houses and dungeon-stone like buildings graced this kingdom. North of the center, a tall castle stood erect into the sky and southeast from the heart was a beautiful cathedral where the prayers of many were made.
The Temple Knight wore a Temple Knight’s long sword and a set of blue and white Temple Knight armor of scales, even a Temple Knight crest embedded shield to his side, a winged shield. His hair was like Auricant’s, silver and long but was not so neat and less visible with his helm. The sun was due to appear soon and the skies were picking up a light blue color. In Windurst it was morning and Bastok was almost the same.
“Interesting... a knight in blue armor at the King’s grave. And even more so, he talked of an object that was to be at rest there. That is quite the bizarre occurrence†the Temple Knight Baramore said to the adventurer, his words were not without deep concentration.
“Yes, well on the other note, I did found proof that his majesty’s final resting place was indeed disturbed by foul scandals.†Auricant said in his young charming voice. He quickly handed Baramore evidence of Orcish intrusions, a handful of armor scales.
“Thank you; your efforts will not be a futility. Please do me a favor though...†the Temple Knight said unfinished.
“What is that good sir of this state?†Auricant flattered the knight.
“Forget everything about this blue armored knight, it is better off you not know him†Baramore asked awkwardly. It seemed Baramore didn’t know a thing about this mysterious figure gazing the King’s tomb but he had a feeling. He was not a mere, unmemorable person.
Auricant looked questionably at the Temple Knight for a moment. “Of course sir, I will return the next day to do another task. I am tired and I seek some rest before the beginning of the day.†Auricant walked away after a short exchange of waves. The memories of that past quickly came back to his head. He was the one of many heroes who lost their fathers in the war.
‘It has been twenty years since the war. My father battled along side many great soldiers. In his little time returned, spent with his family, he told me of special knights who wore rare armor. This could be what I have been looking for: What killed my father in battle and does it still dwell on this plane’ Auricant pondered to himself. ‘Whatever be the creature sent my father to the Paradise shall die and the blue knight knows it’s name’ Auricant stated in his mind. It wasn’t a false threat.
He sat on a stone bench for a short second, still a little weary from his mission, which wrapped around the town square’s fountain: the Parade Grounds. He watched at the rising sun with his unforgiving eyes. “Lightsday†he said under his breath. He pulled out an inch of his stainless sword from its sheath then quickly placed it back, admiring its craftsmanship.
“I am so lost in this fortress city!†said a girlish Hume voice Auricant heard and what caused him to immediately retreat his blade.
This is not the first thread of the story. Old thread -> http://www.ffxionline.com/forums/sho...3&page=1&pp=20 . I've added a sub title to this one, which isn't exactly official. I also edited Chapter 1 a little(its slightly more barable). Anyway... Here you go. Thank you to Hinatakun, who pretty much runs this ship ;p. PS. Ode is like part of a song. So Ode One means, part one.
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The Vana'diel Tragedy
Romance of a Crumbled Rose
Ode One
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VANA’DIEL TRAGEDY
Chapter One: Common Acquaintances and Total Strangers
Many ages after five tears were shed…
In a walk to unknown lands...
Young of the ancients awaken the shadow...
Giving life to their sleeping fathers…
The beasts are seduced by the power of decay...
Finally the kingdom of the evil falls thanks to heroes...
Years since the great rage that scarred many...
The shadow is reborn by the temptation of strength....
Only those affected by the chaos could stop it...
Behind the evil is the true darkness...
The light of the fallen ancients will cast the final curse...
The land to be eaten alive by the souls of the people…
The violent eyed man will see into the red eyes of his brother
Only the mortals can end the damnation...
And Reveal The Final Truths.
-A ripped article found on the expedition in Xarcabard ten years before the Crystal War.
“How far is it, papa?†a child boy Tarutaru’s voice said in question, somewhere in the total blackness.
“Notaru far†a grown male Tarutaru’s voice responded with a hint of happiness.
“Run! It is a Yagudo! It has a sworrrrd!†a young Mithran girl shouted with fear.
“Papa! Whaty you doing?! We got to run!†the child’s voice screamed in related panic.
“Run my son. Protect your mother as I will protect you two and Koshii’s familyâ€
“Papa!â€... “Papa!â€... “Papaaaa!â€
The loud thunder exploded in sound.
Kurin-Juran jumped out of his warm bed with a gasp. He was out of breath and in a cold sweat. The room was in total darkness. Heavy rain pounded on the roof and windows with roaring thunder could be heard from outside. Kurin wiped the sweat off his forehead. Those words and the darkness, he never stopped getting that nightmare. It was a true occurrence: the last moments of his father’s life. His head ached and he rubbed the sides of his skull.
‘That Yagudo with that long, curved sword, he... it... killed my father’ Kurin-Juran thought to himself. ‘Yet I still avoid hunting them now that I have gathered the strength to do so. Why?’ Kurin questioned his own beliefs while his face lay buried in his tiny hands. The ache ended slowly. Kurin-Juran was a Tarutaru, very short in the standards of a Hume. His head was big, like others of his race, with untidy silver hair and bright blue eyes. Two long ears sprouted from the sides his head. A piece of his silver hair was spiked up out of randomness. In the obscurity his tan skin color seemed almost black.
Those were memories of when he went to Mhaura to avoid the war, now titled the Crystal War or the Great War, with his family and a Mithran family. A Yagudo attacked and killed the Mithran father with a single slice. Before the Yagudo could finish the whole Mithran family, Kurin’s father tackled the Beastmen. The Yagudo’s blade impaled his father as Kurin watched in horror with his mother’s hand pulling him away. With the little of the strength the heroic Tarutaru had left, he cast a spell of thunder that electrocuted and killed them both. Once they reached Mhaura, they prayed for the lives lost.
Kurin-Juran slid out of the red sheets of his simple bed and walked to his armory. He changed out of his green pajama-like commoner clothing into an adventurer’s attire: A brown tunic with black designs and a small leather pack located on the back, lined purple slops, small worn out shoes, a leather belt worn by shamans, and a well-cut wooden rod. He then went over to a small round table crafted for Tarutarus’ size. On the furnishing were two amber jewel earrings, two bone-like rings, and two silver armlets. Kurin put them all on. The Tarutaru walked to his fountain and rinsed his face and his hands. He waited for the rain to end as he sat in a small chair, in the night’s blackness. Once the rain stopped shortly soon following the thunder, he opened the rosewood door and walked out. After shutting the door behind him he traveled through the Windurst residential area on wet ground, wooden and dirt. On his way to the Port district, Kurin saw many small wooden houses and one large Jeuno-style building for foreign adventurers.
Windurst was a city carved out of rock and grassland. No iron or steel streets and structures. Trees and grass was everywhere in the huge city. The roads were dirt or rock tile and the buildings were wood. From almost any point in Windurst or near it, one could see Heaven’s Tower. Heaven’s Tower was a magical tower with a very large tree growing right out of it. Its size is legendary and seems one would be close to the moon if they stood to the very top. Also noticeable in Windurst was its battle scars from the Crystal War. Entire districts had been sunken into lakes, with long bridges connecting the islands that remained.
Once in Port, the smell of salty seawater was summoned to Kurin’s small fuzzy nose. He noticed the sky, now clear of dark clouds, was getting lighter. “Day is coming-moming soon†the Tarutaru caught himself saying quietly. He walked over to the fishing guild’s dock. He had about one hour until it would open. He looked at the everlasting sea slowly giving birth to the sun and he smiled. Today would be his first mission with his friend Cronin, so beginning the alliance that a legend will be based around.
Many regions away... across the Bastore sea... two Bastokian warriors stood in the streets of the Metalworks district. Day seemed even farther on the other side of Vana'diel, Bastok. They were clad in blue plated chain mail armor and guarded the President’s Office as Iron Musketeers.
“So, heard about these two low ranked Bastokian adventurers?†the bald Hume one said to a fellow Hume with blond spiky hair.
“Hmmm… ranked low and important? I never heard anything about them†answered the young Iron Musketeer interested as he kicked his unfitting boot in, using the stone ground below.
“Well they are quite the impressive ones... a Hume with skills said to be similar to and as strong Zeid himself!†the tattooed bald Hume described.
“Wow... the Galkan swordsman who gave his life in the Crystal War to fight the Shadow Lord?! What about the other one?†he asked with a shock.
“The other one is named Bleeding Wolf or something... a Galka who claims he served the Tale-Keeper in his past life and will do so again. Both of their fighting abilities are said to be superb. In fives days they already have become ‘Rank Three’!†the Hume storyteller finally finished being as fascinated himself as if he heard it.
“Centurion status in five days? That is amazing... truly amazing" the listener was stunned for a second and then continued, "Speaking of the Tale-keeper. Rumors among the miners say that he has returnedâ€.
“Yes, it seems a lot of strange happenings are in play. Also they say the Quadavs and the rest of the Beastmen seem more active than ever. I think the Mythril Musketeers will be needed soon†the bald Hume said glaring up toward the stars that graced the black sky. “Rare sight in Bastok to see the stars...â€
The republic named Bastok was a city built on the mountains and mines, half of it over the salty sea. Using the newest technology of carpentry and building, Bastok looked very modern. The roads and houses were built with white and gray stone. At the center of the city were a large factory house and a series of giant smokestacks that rose out of the roof. Bastok’s air was muggy and dense due to the blacksmithing and engineering constantly being done.
On the other side of Bastok, the Mines, two adventurers walked the shadowy streets.
“Shinato... we will be late†a Galka said quietly who was very big even contrasted to any other Galka. His pale and gray skin was under a tan doublet, black slacks, a white martial arts belt, and no weapons or footwear. His black hair, both on body and head, was spiked up on the very top of his head. Sticking out of his doublet was his thick tail.
“Bah, screw them. Stupid president officials!†a black haired Hume said with a growl. His brunette hair was in a bang and messy fashion. He wore the armor of a Centurion: Blue and white scaled breastplate and mail, gauntlets, leg ware, boots and helm. On his back were a large wooden-handle scythe and an even larger black-bladed great sword at the same time. Shinato's was able to hold both weapons on his back as if it was one. Very slightly engraved on the great sword close to the handle was the word ‘Deathbringer’.
“Shinato, pesky as they may be in your eyes, we should respect our leaders and their whims†the Galka said looking forward at their inclined destination.
“Yeah... yeah... respect that! Bow to him! Don’t kill it!†Shinato mimicked the lawful Galka while they rapidly walked down some stairs. His voice was pretty spiteful.
“I only speak the virtuous word. We are heroes and people expect us to act so†the Galka responded with almost no emotion: obliviously grown numb of his Hume partner’s whining.
“Wrong my friend. I am an adventurer... a mercenary. On that topic, I pay taxes! I don't even have a real house... rather crap if I could say so myself. I would like to see the president slaughter hundreds of Quadavs like we have†Shinato kept on complaining as they went down another set of stone stairs.
They reached the in-house tunnel entrance to the Market district. “Well Shinato you go protest to our president while I get our information. Then we do it†he said with his fur glowing from the lunar light like a wolf singing to the moon.
“Bleeding Wolf... don’t be the government’s dog!†Shinato scald his friend looking away in disgust.
“Hmmm, I have been called worst, even by you†answered Bleeding Wolf humorlessly, though not without a smirk, as they entered the dark gate leading to the Market district.
On the same continent, but several miles and miles away; past the Konschtatt Highlands, the Valkrum Dunes, and the La Theine Plateau... in the center of mighty forest Ronfarue, was a proud kingdom: San d’Oria. It was night there too. Most of the long-eared Elvaans were asleep in their beds, crude or royal. The Temple Knights stood at the Ranperre’s Gate, blocking off any Orcs who would wish to slaughter this kingdom’s peoples.
Auricant, an adult Elvaan in his tan lizard leather armor and helm with a large sliver shield strapped to his right arm, was having a conversation with one of them. His long, neat hair was silver. San d’Oria was a kingdom with castle-based design. People often called it a fortress more than a city. The city had much plant life living within the gate walls unlike Bastok, but nowhere as much as Windurst had. Gray brick and black wood built houses and dungeon-stone like buildings graced this kingdom. North of the center, a tall castle stood erect into the sky and southeast from the heart was a beautiful cathedral where the prayers of many were made.
The Temple Knight wore a Temple Knight’s long sword and a set of blue and white Temple Knight armor of scales, even a Temple Knight crest embedded shield to his side, a winged shield. His hair was like Auricant’s, silver and long but was not so neat and less visible with his helm. The sun was due to appear soon and the skies were picking up a light blue color. In Windurst it was morning and Bastok was almost the same.
“Interesting... a knight in blue armor at the King’s grave. And even more so, he talked of an object that was to be at rest there. That is quite the bizarre occurrence†the Temple Knight Baramore said to the adventurer, his words were not without deep concentration.
“Yes, well on the other note, I did found proof that his majesty’s final resting place was indeed disturbed by foul scandals.†Auricant said in his young charming voice. He quickly handed Baramore evidence of Orcish intrusions, a handful of armor scales.
“Thank you; your efforts will not be a futility. Please do me a favor though...†the Temple Knight said unfinished.
“What is that good sir of this state?†Auricant flattered the knight.
“Forget everything about this blue armored knight, it is better off you not know him†Baramore asked awkwardly. It seemed Baramore didn’t know a thing about this mysterious figure gazing the King’s tomb but he had a feeling. He was not a mere, unmemorable person.
Auricant looked questionably at the Temple Knight for a moment. “Of course sir, I will return the next day to do another task. I am tired and I seek some rest before the beginning of the day.†Auricant walked away after a short exchange of waves. The memories of that past quickly came back to his head. He was the one of many heroes who lost their fathers in the war.
‘It has been twenty years since the war. My father battled along side many great soldiers. In his little time returned, spent with his family, he told me of special knights who wore rare armor. This could be what I have been looking for: What killed my father in battle and does it still dwell on this plane’ Auricant pondered to himself. ‘Whatever be the creature sent my father to the Paradise shall die and the blue knight knows it’s name’ Auricant stated in his mind. It wasn’t a false threat.
He sat on a stone bench for a short second, still a little weary from his mission, which wrapped around the town square’s fountain: the Parade Grounds. He watched at the rising sun with his unforgiving eyes. “Lightsday†he said under his breath. He pulled out an inch of his stainless sword from its sheath then quickly placed it back, admiring its craftsmanship.
“I am so lost in this fortress city!†said a girlish Hume voice Auricant heard and what caused him to immediately retreat his blade.
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