Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

[Spazz]

Can I get some feedback. I think its missing something... but I dunno.

[InuTrunks]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

Personally, the background is too blurry, and way too bland.

[Drawmuh]

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The background is what its missing but other then thats its a really good concept =)

[Spazz]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

any ideas on how to make it better... I will fix how blurry it is... I wanted to somewhat take the focus off the monsters and more so on the wounded wyvern and the DRG trying to protect it.

[InuTrunks]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

Yea, I see what you were trying to do with it, but it just kinda hurts my eyes, also, try making a background for it.

[Kagerou]

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Hmm, thats a hard concept to make backgrounds out of. If u make the background too flashy, it will distract the characters too much. But from what I see so far, the background is too simple and bland (and the font needs to stand out more). For the fonts make it white and add effects (use blending option).

Dunno what I would do with the backgrounds atm >.<

[tdh]

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The Wyvern looks like it's sleeping not hurt. I didn't know what your intentions where until I read thepost.

And the hands on the Taru look weird. I've been looking at them trying to figure out just what in hell those are. Outside of the other things pointed out I think that's all.

[Spazz]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

Taru Hands natually look funky in gloves. We taru's are used to this fact.

As for the looking like it sleeping... ?????.... this was actually one thing I was really uncertain about. How do I make the wyvern look wounded but not to the point where it is dead?

As for the background... thats extremely hard to do just like Kagerou said.

So... I dunno... I will keep altering it and post something tomorrow. Until then... more suggestions would be awesome. Thanks!

[Altae]

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Maybe you can get a screenshot of when it's taking off from the ground and ready to just hang in the air. It has to be that moment of transition. Or, take a screenshot of it on the ground with /sit.

[SlizenDize]

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The demon is lower down in the picture then the taru and thus it makes it look like the taru is floating or flying or possibly, standing on the wyrven. Personally I like plain backgrounds so don't change that. I like how you made it so it looks like they come out of the shadow.

If you were however going to change the background maybe you'd want to make it look more like a spotlight on the taru and his wyrven. Nice picture btw

[Spazz]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

I have an idea I will be trying. It will make it plain, yet busy at the same time. I will be using the spotlight idea aswell as the compliment of the "coming out of the shadows" comment.

as for the wyvern position... I have taken a picture of my wyvern dieing in combat.. and I will be using that as reference.

Again, thanks for comments. If you stil have some after reading all this - please, do not make me stop you. Any comment is welcome (unless it is immoral or unethical or may cause harm to others because - yes, words can hurt).

[Altae]

Re: Dragoon's Sacrifice Wallpaper

(unless it is immoral or unethical or may cause harm to others because - yes, words can hurt).

Don't let this fool you. It only affects people who know what you're talking about. Others who are incapable of comprehending insults of sorts are almost immune to this. Because they'll just snap back at you with comments such as, "Oh yeah? Well you're mom did blah blah blah blah last night, so there!"

[Deci]

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hmmm.

[Hecky]

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lol the consept is cool!

Id do all to protect my Toryu^^ I think its nice

[Tiamat_Zero]

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why not try having the just one monster or two not three and also add a location to the backround like a cave or hill side plus make the wyvern look injured other than that its a cool concept.