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I gave you a 4 because I understand (and like) the concept your going for but I don't like the execution.
For one your bright red background almost makes it too "cheery" for a group called the Dark Ones. WAY TOO BRIGHT! Also, the lettering your using either needs to be refined bigtime or thrown out completely. At first glance it looks like something a 1st grader doodled down on his picture of a haunted house TRYING to make it look scary........just makes me laugh though. And as posted before your Anarchy sign is a good idea, but the "A" is a little too small and makes it look like someone drew an "O" around it to make fun of you. (The Dork Ones)
The eyes are a nice touch but the overall image is bland. (the second image with the characters in negative color needs to go....) Just keep working on it, it's a good concept that just needs an overall. Keep us updated also, we don't want people thinking you really ARE the Dork Ones because you have a crappy logo......
For one your bright red background almost makes it too "cheery" for a group called the Dark Ones. WAY TOO BRIGHT! Also, the lettering your using either needs to be refined bigtime or thrown out completely. At first glance it looks like something a 1st grader doodled down on his picture of a haunted house TRYING to make it look scary........just makes me laugh though. And as posted before your Anarchy sign is a good idea, but the "A" is a little too small and makes it look like someone drew an "O" around it to make fun of you. (The Dork Ones)
The eyes are a nice touch but the overall image is bland. (the second image with the characters in negative color needs to go....) Just keep working on it, it's a good concept that just needs an overall. Keep us updated also, we don't want people thinking you really ARE the Dork Ones because you have a crappy logo......
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